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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Harry_Ba11sach]
#287887 - 09/28/09 05:15 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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which ones? the back side or the front side?
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287894 - 09/28/09 05:32 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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all of them.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Harry_Ba11sach]
#287896 - 09/28/09 05:33 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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lol well I have to disagree with you on the front. I think it looks pretty pro. The back I havent spent much time on so I will agree it doesnt look that great.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287900 - 09/28/09 05:45 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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it looks pretty pro in terms of stoners with photoshop, but think about some of the magazine ads you've seen. yours is good, but it's really missing that final professional flair that makes it worthy of being in a national publication
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Harry_Ba11sach]
#287916 - 09/28/09 06:29 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Easy guys. Let's keep it civil, and keep the criticism constructive. If there's nothing specific to add or edit from a design, it doesn't serve a purpose here.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: 81renaissance]
#287922 - 09/28/09 06:35 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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sorry I didn't mean for that to sound mean at all. I've had a long day of tests and projects so my thoughts are probably a bit more succinct than they ought to be for sounding properly nice. Please accept my apologies trip, you know I like ya
In an attempt to clarify - I just think that our publications need some sort of special something to make them stand out in that magazine. a nice bud shot and some words looks pretty good, but so does every other page of the magazine. I'm thinking of something to really make it stand out from the crowd, ya know?
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: 81renaissance]
#287923 - 09/28/09 06:36 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Here's an example of what I think we should be looking for with regards to the professional presentation.
Imagine a nice bud where the ladies head is with pot leaves instead of all those other stupid designs. Something like that would be really neat. Just reading through this photoshop book im getting a lot of ideas. I can't focus on this tonight due to preparation for tomorrows activities.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: FurrowedBrow]
#287925 - 09/28/09 06:39 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Here's another example of a professional product...
Those are just a few i found online in about 5 minutes.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Harry_Ba11sach]
#287931 - 09/28/09 06:49 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Harry_Ba11sach said: it looks pretty pro in terms of stoners with photoshop, but think about some of the magazine ads you've seen. yours is good, but it's really missing that final professional flair that makes it worthy of being in a national publication
I didnt think it was going in a magazine.....I thought it was going to be notecards....Quote:
Harry_Ba11sach said: sorry I didn't mean for that to sound mean at all. I've had a long day of tests and projects so my thoughts are probably a bit more succinct than they ought to be for sounding properly nice. Please accept my apologies trip, you know I like ya
In an attempt to clarify - I just think that our publications need some sort of special something to make them stand out in that magazine. a nice bud shot and some words looks pretty good, but so does every other page of the magazine. I'm thinking of something to really make it stand out from the crowd, ya know?
Ya man no big deal.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287947 - 09/28/09 07:09 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Im gonna keep working on it. I added a hand before the G on growery.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287951 - 09/28/09 07:16 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Triptonic said:
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Harry_Ba11sach said: it looks pretty pro in terms of stoners with photoshop, but think about some of the magazine ads you've seen. yours is good, but it's really missing that final professional flair that makes it worthy of being in a national publication
I didnt think it was going in a magazine.....I thought it was going to be notecards....
That's beside the point at this stage. Yours is progressing nicely!
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: FurrowedBrow]
#287954 - 09/28/09 07:18 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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I'm thinking I dont like the lettering by the bullets.....Opinions? I might add a layer of pot leaves over the whole thing as well.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287955 - 09/28/09 07:20 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Like I said before I still think the lettering is too generic. I am going to take a picture of one of the best pot leafs i have in my garden and photoshop the blades into letters. I can't wait to put more time into this instead of just talking about it. I just don't have the knowledge yet.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: FurrowedBrow]
#287958 - 09/28/09 07:24 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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lol....its going to be a lot of work to make letters from pot leaves that look good. But I wish you the best of luck. What version of Photoshop do you have?
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287959 - 09/28/09 07:30 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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I just got the Creative Suite 4 package (im told it's the newest one). I'm planning on making this a serious time commitment. Plus it's just good to have those kind of skills and this is a GREAT project for us ALL to develop those skills.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: FurrowedBrow]
#287963 - 09/28/09 07:47 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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lol thats the one I have. Photoshop is a pretty sweet program. But you can easily waste way to much of your life on it haha.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287964 - 09/28/09 07:49 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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sweet! Check this book out.....
http://thepiratebay.org/torrent/5097687/McGraw-Hill.How.To.Do.Everything.Adobe.Photoshop.CS4.Edition.J
It really seems like an intuitive program. I used to have an old version in college. I couldn't do anything with it. I used it to do basic things and goof around. when i was working on my thesis I was involved in a program that grouped me with an industrial designer, graphic designer, and engineer to develop a product. That was an eye opening experience for a lot of reasons. What those designers were capable of just blew me away. Anyway, they introduced me to photoshop. i was focused on other stuff so never really learned it. Add some layers to that pic man. fancy it up!
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: FurrowedBrow]
#287966 - 09/28/09 07:54 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Will do.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287975 - 09/28/09 08:20 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Lol hey man hows that for a layer I might change the stars to MJ leaves though and its still a rough draft but I like it lol its ironic.
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Re: Growery Marketing Submissions Thread [Re: Triptonic]
#287999 - 09/28/09 09:06 PM (15 years, 16 days ago) |
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Triptonic said: Lol hey man hows that for a layer I might change the stars to MJ leaves though and its still a rough draft but I like it lol its ironic.
Excellent!
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